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Look of love

when  you  touch  me  i  shiver

when  you  look  at  me  i  see everything  in  your  eyes

when  your  eyes  touch  my  soul  i  know  i  love  you!

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  • KyleBerg gold member
    July 1

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    Bordering on cliche, yet doing so in such a way that just makes it all the more sweet.
    Excellently executed write.


  • boiledegg
    June 29

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    This is heavenly... love to revist that place again. A nice concised and sweet piece shared. I love it!


  • sarajaneUK
    December 28, 2008

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    Ohhhh, what a wonderful feeling this is, and captured in only a few words too. Nice one! Peace and love for the New Year. xxxx