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if i could...

if i could....
take away the pain of doing the right thing
i would in a heartbeat

if i could....
make things different i wouldnt hesitate
i would in a heart beat

if i could....
stop the pain your feeling right now
i would in a heartbeat

if i could....
make it all better for everyone concerned
i would in a heartbeat

if i could....
listen and support anytime night or day
i would in a heartbeat

if i could....
i would....
i will always be there
in a heartbeat

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  • xXMe17xX
    June 14
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    really good choice of words.i like the flow too.good write

    Please take a look at my poems and commet would mean the world to me x


  • tellnotalesxx
    December 11, 2008
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    THiiS iiS SO0O0 CUTEEE!!
    iiN A HEARTBEATT" L0VEE iittt!!!!
    ^^)
    -MELIJELI <33