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My Every Liquid Drop Awaits You

 

Stained imperfection you are
Glistening moonlight from afar
Crystallized water has traced out your face
Dancing with abstract affections of grace

Movement is blind to the glare water gleam
Silver reeds stand in a monochrome stream
A touch so smooth it is burning the skin
By freezing a drop, a drop falls within

 

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  • Galaxy2
    January 17
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    What a title!
    Interesting read...
    brilliant, I must say...
    Kisses all over, honey!
    Gal2


  • Blueskywonder
    December 12, 2008

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    I'd forgotten how much of a dood poet you are and this is a very sensual piece. I'm pleased all is well


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    December 11, 2008

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    This is yummy. The only thing I see wrong with it is grammatical. It should be "Crystallized water has.."


  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Thank you for your soft sensual offering to my contest, good luck, Josie