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Eternity

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Life Given



Life Lived



Life Ends







Life Given



Life Lives



For Eternity.......













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I do not claim the pictures with this write to be my own. Pictures found on yahoo images.

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  • couldbeworse
    January 5
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    simple but very great write.

  • New-n-Improved
    December 15, 2008

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    Simple and Plain

    Straight to the point is the way I like it. You did good with the title and the pics. Great!!!
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.


  • blueyez
    December 15, 2008

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    I love the pic of the little angel!!!! Soooooo cute! I really like how you used these pics and tied them into the write!
    Peace and Love


  • Ms Lez
    December 12, 2008
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    the poem has a spiritual touch. its short but very nice indeed

  • mz.butter
    December 12, 2008

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    wonderful write

    The alpha and the omega,the beginning and the end.Very good symbolism of life and love the pictures.


  • love-SEX-magic
    December 12, 2008
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    wow its short but gets right to the point...speechless


  • Maxboy gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    Beautifully done and that picture is soooo cute.

    Well Done


  • Lexie -
    December 12, 2008
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    Awww this is certainly a softer side of you, it's beautiful, deep and genuinly heart warming


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 12, 2008

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    Nice job.Very well expressed with very few words. The poem is perfectly illustrated. I enjoyed this alot.

    Mike


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 12, 2008

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    they are nice and they fit the poem well, kind of a circle if you think about it, keep it flowing my friend, beautiful words


  • greeny
    December 12, 2008
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    what can i say?
    bravo!! bravo!!
    "ang galing"..


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    i sooooooooooo love it reminds me of my tiny baby at once upon a time very deep poetry and i thought i get deep goodness this is poetry to me it is you know i am more into this genre anyway


  • Desire gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow~

    Oh My Beautiful~ this is one deep Powerful verse You have penned!
    Bravo~ and the images through Your words also through physical scene~ touches deep
    Excellent!
    Brevity with Impact
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Wow, this is awesome with some
    beautiful imagery my dear friend.
    I love your thoughts in this one.
    Great job putting this piece together
    here and keep it up! I hope that you
    are well and take care!




    Jeremy0826


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    wow

    lovely imagery, wonderful and sweet story..touching. nice work my friend, very nice.


  • moluv10
    December 11, 2008
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    very beautiful. i love the pictures.


  • penman gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Awww, this is so very touching. You did a great job. Thank you so much for sharing.

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