Eyes so soft, so warm
so pure.
when I look in them,
such comfort I endure.
hands so carefully concious of I.
when you touch me,
all the pain of the world subsides.
lips so full, so gentle,
so lavishingly sweet.
I melt from the inside, out
when our lips finally meet.
voice so deep, so seducing,
so emotionally twining.
I've become lustfully insane,
and you're the one driving.
each smile, each kiss,
is a momentary bliss.
every touch,
every heart pounding vibe.
Its like an adrenaline rush,
an internal ride.
And so, I've come to realize
that I'm so lost in your eyes.
I am lost in your touch,
lost in your kiss, and your gentle sound.
I'm so lost in you, and I never want to be found.
Author notes
Ambrea
A contest entry
- Heart Wrenching by ChunkyC.
950 points, ended December 23, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love love or hate love by BloodWhiteOleander.
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Comments
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this is good hun i like it
good luck in the contest.
xoxo ellie -
Very nice flow and rhyme, so natural and beautiful! you have so much talent!
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That is incredibly beautiful! And you're rhyming so mature. I was very very impressed. I like your style. It's very well established.
†Lea
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Giggle. This is really cute. I love it. The little things that people do for us and how we fall so in love.. I know how this feels all too well.
*each smile, each kiss,
is a momentary bliss.*
My favorites. Totally true. Amazing. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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