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Lost Souls

Standing outside at the window bright
Looking on in awe at the glowing lights

Cold winds blowing there in the snow
Dreaming of the fire's warming glow

Is this the spirit that they talk about
To be on the inside instead of the out

I heard the preacher talk about Bethlehem
Baby Jesus born oh to be warm again

Smelling all the scents of cooking food
I don't understand I tried to be good

Time to return to the shack called home
No Christmas tree just me alone

So remember me when you welcome the day
Think of me when you sit down to pray

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 17, 2008

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    Individuals have different experiences, which is alright as long as every individual treats every other individual with respect -- which doesn't happen.


  • Cynthia Gaines
    December 14, 2008

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    Beautiful Melancholy...

    Thank you so much for entering your poignant and sad poem in my contest. There is much food for thought here. I'm wishing you all the best!!
    & ,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Sandygram silver member
    December 12, 2008

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    What a sad Christmas poem. We should all remember those who are sad and lonely this Christmas. Your words are so heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Many Blessing and Gods Love to fill your day my friend. Sandy


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 11, 2008

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    This has such a saddened tone to it. But so many could walk in those very shoes you write about and the empty feelings to go with them.
    But you're one that will be through of this holiday season anyways.

    Good luck in the contest hun

    Storm