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Sensory Love

Ice blue eyes
tell me they love me.

Half smile
tells me he's listening.

Outstretched hand
shows his open heart.

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Option 3.
Tell me in 20 words about your love.

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  • Hannie
    December 11, 2008

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    Awww such a gorgeous poem....So very well written.

    Thanks a bunch for entering and good luck!!

    Hannie.