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Purest Gold



Purest it was, that is thy soul
Precious memories
Ingrained in our souls
Treasured & humbly
embraced beyond the purest gold
You fought & stood &
gave it your all
Now your corpse lays
breathless before us all
Left the pain behind
this world to find
Purest love full of joy next to
the father up in his divine 
& your memories we will
Cherish and treasure
Beyond the purest gold
& here is my salute to all
that did their part & served us all



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  • Soft-Rain
    December 13, 2008

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    Your making me cry again...this was a beautiful dedication to those who served (it is sad , yes but). You give them their honor they deserve and bring me to tears.

    ~Lisa~