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Love Me

My heart
Is forever
Yours
To hold
Love me
Hate me
It doesn't matter
My feelings for you
Shall never change
Squeeze me
Please me
Take me away
Away from here
Hold me tight
As you say
Good night
Never let go
Even though I may fight
Love me
Hate me
Squeeze me
Please me
Hold me
Forever
My heart
Is yours

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  • Candice Bezanson
    August 20

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    this was very cute and very nicely written. I think we have all had this person that we just wanted to hold onto forever. Thank you for sharing :0)


  • Brethaknee
    December 12, 2008

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    its is very nice

    ist sweet and i can see that its an unconditional love i myself have never loved but im still young and have time (hopefully) but your poem is good


  • moluv10
    December 11, 2008
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    nice sweet poem. I enjoyed it very much. keep writing.