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Laura's Song

Hidden soul of a unicorn
  White wings beating strong

Listening to the flowing words
That tell soft Laura's Song

Pain has etched upon her soul
Coldness has touched her heart

Yet the strength hides within

With wisdom her words impart

Pride still shows within the lines
As the unicorn takes wing

Always lifting souls higher still
As once again the heart sings

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Beautifully Inspiring...

    There is also a song called, "Little Miss Laurie". As always, John, this is a truly great poem, and I'm sure your friend Laura absolutely loves your fine tribute to her generous and loving soul!!! Good work, Poet!!! Peace & hugs always, xx Cyn xx


  • Sandygram
    December 12, 2008

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    Terrific Write

    There is a song called Laura's Song. It is quite lovely. You poem is so lovelky too. Wonderful imagery. A pleasure to read this morning dear friend. Bless you. Sandy


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    This is pretty indeed