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Perfect Poison

Perfect poison

is just like you,

you keep me together

tell me you love me,

then rip me to shreds.

 

Black is your hair,

White is your skin,

perfect is your face,

perfect are your lips,

poison is your soul

 

you are made of perfect poison

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justo let the judge know i really liked the poem you did with this title
twas' perfect poison in itself

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    December 17, 2008

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    Thanks, so glad that you liked the poem itself!

    I know someone who is like a perfect poison. Or at least, they just somehow make me want more, even though I know they're slowly killing me.