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Something In Place of You

Water so blue and true
pure and simple does the rain fall
as I look to the heavens
drenched is my face
cleansed is my body
lifted is my spirit
I felt the rain upon my face
I felt nature's grace
kind and cool is the falling rain
tears of heaven upon my terrain
every little drip, every little drop
cleansing my soul in need of something new, something pure, something true
something in place of you

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  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 12, 2008

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    awww this is utterly beautiful
    i really love the last three lines, they are rather spiritual.
    this whole piece gave me chills. you are such a talented writer.

    your Faerie