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she is beautiful yes

She is beautiful yes
but under blushed skin
mascara and eyeshadow
coverup within
she is nothing but a face
that has no meaning
a body of bones
skin hung on
starvation left away
and hair falling out
in the magazines she rests
in beauty people believe
but in her mind she wheeps
for this nees to leave
the money comes upon her
the smiles and the fame
but inside that mind
under that coverup
she will always be the same
starved

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    January 28
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    very very meaningfull. i always enjoying reading your new poems. you are so talented. i miss you alot and hope to here from you soon.
    iloveyou
    joy


  • EmmaDilemma93
    December 15, 2008

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    wow, Mary you talent never ceases to amaze me!
    this is beautiful, hopefully not about you,
    because I know this is more to you than a pretty face.


  • writex
    December 12, 2008

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    This ones really awesome. I know you're talking about models but I can relate to it still. Very great job (:

  • Joy.To.The.World
    December 11, 2008

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    I LIke this one alot i think its actually my favorite that you've written. line fourteen really kind of confuses me though i dont know maybe im stupid. but great poem mary