A water fall, and streams of tender beauty,
emerging through the night, whisper's in silence
of river's with naked hearts,
Roses dancing with
the star's over their heads, and singing Rock
Bands with love songs,
A thou chocolate kisses that melt
and turn to sweet hymns, and like little drops of heaven
more peace grows in my white footsteps,
Warm up a thou
fur, fur that never stops caressing the night,
A nocturnal flower
waiting to be kissed,
I am like the word Precious,
because precious cannot be ignored,
Like a placid lake and falling thin rain
bringing a gentle slow melody,
captivating each touch,
I am not these things
they just live in me.
A contest entry
- I feel so alive by samantha jean.
1200 points, ended December 13, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Such as we are, a precious part a bigger whole!
's I have always felt close and a part of nature for in nature the lessons we learn are ones which will help us through all we may face.'s
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Beautiful!
Such a piece leaves one lingering like the scent of perfume after it's been sprayed, how lovely is the words I've inhaled into my chest. Thanks for giving your best! Each time I read your works of wonder, you amaze me. Continue in light and love, peace. 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo
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