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god told me to

God took me away and cried blood
He said I was neither hot nor cold
He spit me out,
Like divine wind.
He said,"murder the world,
they deserve it."
I agreed and felt nothing.
God wept and said,I would be born again.
Destroyed and remade.
That it was not my fault.
I said,"fine,just help me kill
everything."
God seemed distant to me.
I don't know what I am.
I don't like that I am.
I like all others less.
You die now,OK.
I want to be born again.
Its better this way.
Am I a victim?
Not when the shoe is on the other foot.
you need to square that.

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  • Cookie Sasquatch
    December 12, 2008

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    ok i dont like this write at all..god would not tell u to kill off the entire world...he made us....i am a firm believer in god...unless ur god is differentlike ur a damn terrorist then u need to go on and don't post shit on my contests