Do you Miss me?
Do you miss me when you sit there day in,
day out on the things you must get done?
Do you miss me when you are going through hard times,
and you need someone to talk to?
Do you miss me, when it seems all the world is closing in,
and there is no light?
When you get up from your desk and you see my picture,
do you miss me?
When all is quiet and all you are dealing with is your own thoughts,
do you miss me?
When I feel this world is too much for me,
your face appears to me
I miss you
When I sit here with my thoughts and I think of our love,
I feel your touch.
I miss you
I lay me head down at night and pray for your happiness,
Softly i whisper my words on love, and yours i hear in return
I miss you
In everything I am,
you are there
In everything I do
you are there
Heart and soul.
Author notes
Written February 8th, 2004
A contest entry
- Inspiration by RoseBlossom.
300 points, ended June 7, 2004, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
So very lonesome a poem this is. But with the words you use, you make the reader feel very bit of your emotion.
~Willow~ -
So beautiful! I am truley hook on your work. This piece is so beautiful!
-
great
Hmmm. I wonder who this is about? ;-P I like the repitition in the lines. It strengthens the emotions felt. I gotta read some more of yours.
-Paul-
Adding your comment:
