A silver piece,
spotlight in the night,
a dove, could be,
emerald bright
The moon as triangle
or a scrambled egg;
perhaps a quadrangle,
a grapefruit wedge
A question mark
potato chip;
a dust bunny or
giant breathmint
Once you can conceive of these;
you have imagination freed.
Author notes
"When the moon hits you eye like a big pizza pie
That's amore..."
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muse
A contest entry
- The Moon by Dragonbabyx3.
1000 points, ended December 23, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow this piece really made me smile. I agree with the other comments you really do begin to see things in a different light when your imagination is freed. I loved this it flowed brillianty, there was good rhyming. Well done. Hey ont you check out soem of mine i would really love to know what you think. Again well done , it was fab!
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i like this! it made me smile. your right once the imagination is freed the whole world is open up to you.
Its a great poem, thanks for enteirn gmy contest and gd luck -
Beautiful! And So true! Once your imagination is freed, you can begin to find new things, (as well as write about old ones in a new light) I really enjoyed this piece, Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!
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"Once you can conceive of these;
you have imagination freed."
May the rest of the world
join those of us whe see
strange things in the night sky,
the daytime cloud formations,
anywhere one can gaze!
Great! Great! Great!
M-C
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