You are beautiful, when I see your face
I see the light
You're beautiful, even when you're wrong
you make it feel right
You're beautiful, when I hear your voice
I want to scream
You're beautiful,on the other end of the phone
Baby, you're all I need
You're beautiful, and you smell it too
On you shirt
You're beautiful, I could eat you up
but first lets make it work
You're beautiful, your skins kitten soft
and adorable, yes you
You're beautiful, and I think you're great inside out
YES! I bet you taste it tooo
A contest entry
- you are... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 24, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music Inspiration BIG POINTS!! by forethought.
1025 points, ended December 19, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I like the description you made here to show the beauty of the beloved..wonderful flow and fascinating poetry..love it..well done...
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:)
very unique, and insightful good luck in the contest
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Niiice!
A very good length, and I love the imagery in this, etc ''your skin's kitten soft''. A few grammatical errors, but otherwise I think it's great. Thanks for a great write!
From Chaos xx
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