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Silks And Spice

 

 

 

The silent shifting sands that burn beneath the desert sun
a route from East to West was surely laid,
transportation of the finest silks and spices had begun
in bags of gold the traders would be paid.

The sheerest, shining fabrics in a myriad of hues
to clothe the wealthy merchants of the land,
spices shimmer, red and gold for rich and poor to use
would sweetly scent the air on incense strand.

The trains of trusty camels leave no footprints in their wake
but sure of foot they climb the highest dune,
relentless rays of burning sun could cause a man to break
or be frozen by a cold, white, piercing moon.

In flowing robes and turbans came the keepers of the train
respectful of the dangers they would face,
by stories passed from man to boy the knowledge they would gain
about this uninhabitable place.

That was many years ago, the silk routes are no more
but romance in the desert’s still alive,
the richest silks and spices can be brought from any store,
while the tourists help the camels to survive.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • redbird
    December 14, 2008
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    i like the image of being frozen by the moon, best.


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    December 12, 2008

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    wow Sue this is so well written!!! A beautiful beautiful piece!!!! I love it!!! You did such a lovely job with this write!!! Ur details and descriptions are so marvelous and perfect!!!!! I adore the way you write!!!!! You never cease to amaze me with ur incredible writing!!!!!! Much love and big hugs to you. Merry Christmas and happy new year to you!!!!!!!


  • csmmoms2
    December 12, 2008
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    Really lovely

    You have such a talent dear poet. -c


  • cricketjeff gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    A lovely metrical rhyming history lesson.

    The silk road has so much mystery and romance attached that this is a sure fire winner, and when it is done as well as you do it, magic happens

    Jeff


  • RT KatPat
    December 12, 2008

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    Aawwww Gorgeous!


    What a lovely journey you sent us on
    My fav lines???
    "That was many years ago, the silk routes are no more
    but romance in the desert’s still alive,
    the richest silks and spices can be brought from any store,
    while the tourists help the camels to survive."

    Thankyou for this treat.


  • arafura gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    Great work. Makes one wish for those bygone days!


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    December 11, 2008
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    Super artistry of words Sis. A lovely piece.

    Jem xxx


  • RareFlower
    December 11, 2008

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    Rich in Imagery

    beautiful words woven to produce vivid pictures of the camel trains. I love this.... beautful and exquisite write, thankyou so much for your entry and goodluck in the contest.


  • moonbumps silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Brilliant write this and informative too-loved reading-
    Hilly


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Nice job. I have just finished and article about the Takla Makan. It is nice to see some poetry about the same route.

    Mike

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