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Moonlight Love

Slowly undress beneath the moon,
shadow on body sway and dance.
Man's fancy turns to love in June,
time to give romance a chance.

Let eyes gaze on all you long for,
as moon rises full in night sky.
Let me please like never before,
come touch, feel, make me sigh!

A lunar delight in sky and below,
as you bring out the woman in me.
Love enhance in moonlight glow,
as longing runs wild, set it free.

Delve into passion upon this night,
shadows dance, I sway to inspire,
Full moon shines above so bright,
succumb to want of your desire. 

 

 

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  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    December 19, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 15, 2008

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    The last stanza was a major hit! I loved it, drove all your words home, The imagery and feeling you created here was beautiful! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!


  • Beret55 silver member
    December 12, 2008
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    mmmmmmmmmmmm that was beautiful.. Makes you want to be there.


    • Sandygram
      December 12, 2008
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      Good Morning Paul

      Always a pleasure when you drop by. You always bring smiles along with you. So glad you enjoyed the moonlight. Hugs and Smiles. Take care, Sandy


  • Jesann gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    What a beautiful love poem, I really enjoyed reading this..moonlight, passion and desire..a wonderful combination to a night of love - making.


    • Sandygram
      December 12, 2008
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      Thank you for stopping and reading. Take care, Sandy

  • Papagallo
    December 11, 2008
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    Another poem to make my heart race

    Love this one Last line how about: succumb to the want of your desire.

    • Sandygram
      December 12, 2008
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      Good Morning Papagallo

      Thank you for this lovely comment. I appreciate you stopping by and reading. So glad you enjoyed. Take care.

      Sandy

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