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Rage

The Villains are mad!
The Villains are blind!

Sarcasm grips at my tongue
I despise a thousand eyes
Spray me your mantra
And brand me verbally

Labyrinth of doubt
May I curse you?

Holy girls beware the fever
Avoid the thrusting insanity
Watch out for eagle-eyed predators
Do not trust the ears of fear





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  • Rudy Ignatius
    December 14, 2008

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    I don't know if it's the dizziness of sickness or the words themselves that makes it so, but this is in one word: enthralling. I found this to be very allusive, especially enjoying that last stanza. "Holy girls beware the fever." Love that line particularly. Very passion-ridden!

    Brit


  • Ken-Maverick
    December 11, 2008

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    Such a powerful write Vicky,
    They are everywhere indeed these days ,
    thats why its always good to be vigilant, always

    All the best to you my friend

    Ken