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Talk To Me

Baby when you talk to me
I'm not afraid to speak my mind
And tell you that I love you
With my heart and soul combined

Baby when you talk to me
I remember when we met
How I loved the way you looked
In the rain so soaking wet

Baby when you talk to me
When you call me on the phone
I take in all the joy I feel
To use when I'm alone

I can't wait any longer
For the lights to go down
Can't you see that I'm nothing
When you're not around?

Baby when you talk to me
I know you're the only one
I want to hold you so close
And never be a lonely one

Talk to me

Author notes

RAOUL ROCKS!

my name is When Doves Cry (but you knew that)

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Oh YEAH ROCK ON OUTFIELD!

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Comments

  • Great poem!
    I liked it.


  • ratkos
    December 19, 2008

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    another one that hit it on the head.i could also substitute your words for the lyrics of the poem.great work!


  • Ademon
    December 14, 2008
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    I really like this, a better version of the song itself I might ad!


    • Cry Little Sister
      December 14, 2008
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      I actually just got hooked to Outfield, and this song is one that I can't stop listening to!