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blue

the color of blue,
it brings me back to you
in knowing what you do,
like an owl knows to "coo"
a world of potential
with such a sorrowfull grin
if only you knew
the world you could let in
if you listened to the words i spoke
you would soon be awoke.
i wont give up on you blue.
nomatter what i do.
ill make you into shades of yellow
and seperate the red.
ease your mind, until your mellow
and i wont give up untill im dead. 
no matter what you do
ill always love you blue.

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  • esimbf
    December 19, 2008

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    I really really love this poem it is soooo cute and amazing. I can really relate to it you are such a good writer write more!!!!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Beautifully Poignant...

    Thank you for your entry in this contest, and for sharing your muse's heart-warming creativity!! Wishing you the best of luck, and keep it flowing... Peace always, xx Cyn xx