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I Will Be There.

I will come with you,
I  will take your hand in mine,
And together we will walk,
Through the long deserted road,
Till we  reach the other end.


If a  storm breaks,
With waters wild and raging,
Still I will take your hand in mine,
And  run with you.
If you slip and fall,
Hurting your legs,
I will reach out for you,
And help you  up,
I will take off my rain-coat,
And cover you with it,
I will put my arm around you,
And gently lead you to that far away cabin.
I will rub your legs softly with herbs,
And brave the darkness to find you something to eat.

I  will be there dear,
To cry with you,
To cry for you,
And to laugh when you laugh.
Together we will smile,
When a smile writes on your face,
I will be there,
To walk with you along every road,
Whenever you need me,
Just turn and look by your side,
And you will surely find me,
For  I will be there.

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  • OdeToMoonlight
    December 11, 2008
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    Awww, this was touching, it shows the best side of love. If only more people felt this way!