Failure is all I found
sadness and tears is all I felt
a new beginning was out of my reach
there was no turning back
this is the future I had chosen
Temptation lead me astray
no matter how hard I would try
nothing was right
my fate was beyond my own hands
Each morning I saw the devils face
then I knew, I wouldn't see any brighter days
this was the end for me
Then I saw your face
and your touch was like an angel
a little piece of hope found me
and i had found true love
Now I'm recovered
my fate once again in my own hands
a new begining found
thank you
Author notes
The mistery is who this is about if you can guess it, i suppose i didn't do the best job i could have.
A contest entry
- Unexpected...and Strange by SOLS.Moonlight.
700 points, ended December 18, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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This poem had nice descriptions, but had not true surprise. It almost seems to short, but you did get to the point of things. Good luck in the contest.
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