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with so many scoops

Filled with full of honey
the moon spreads sweets
Not only to the young ones
but also to all other humans

Newly wed  couple glance at you with an elegant  desire
ad old ones strike their looks  at you pitiably with a renewed hope
bless them all with honey drops
in this monetary world with so many scoops

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The Moon

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  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 11, 2008

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    This is sweet! I remember when I first got married, looking up at the moon that night, all my hopes and dreams that I placed upon it. Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!