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to breath the spring in

IN THE GREEN LAND ZONE
AUTUMN strikes it hard and fast
to breath the spring in
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  • TwilightDazzles
    December 11, 2008

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    There is much said in such few words here. I love the last line...great wording. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest


  • Tqop
    December 11, 2008
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    Very nice.

    I love the wordings. Breathe the spring in.

    Very good indeed.