My time of giving
The time of year
For such cold snow
Of frozen tears
My time to die alone
It's so hard to
Watch the frost take me
My pink, warm skin
Turn to blue, to freeze
My alley way, my home
The time of giving
My time of year
For forgetting
I was ever here
Author notes
Charities are pretty cool. *nudge*
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wow, kinda sad, didn't know exactly what you were talking about untill
My alley way, my home.
then i reread it and got it. good job -
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Thanks for the comment! I'm actually thinking of flipping the "My time to die alone / My alley way, my home" lines... Thinking it'll make it easier to tell what's going on. Thoughts?
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