An ecstasy of hidden desire
As the woman feels the flames
Of passon build within her soul.
For the tide washing against her body
Reminds her of being held
And kissed and...
Expereicing an oragasm without entry.
but
She dreams...
That it were more real
And the waves were her lover
Creating the feelings of seduction.
yet
Vividly she still screams
And enjoys the thrill of natures water
Pounding against her body.
dragonheart1
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do yo experiences ssuch vivid dreams?
Comments
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What nature cannot do eh!!!
This poem is very powerful and beautifully stated
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Thumbs up for your work
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This was a really good write, something that had a certain sensuality to it, though the only thing that I would like to point out is that there were some places that had some misspelled words so that kind of threw off the flow a bit, but other then that this was a really enjoyable read, thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Wow
very good write i love it alot very erotic if u close ur eyes you would feel it through and through thank you for sharing keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic and peace out -
This is pure erotic poetry. Beautifully writter, you can close your eyes and almost feel this piece. Well done. Thank You for sharing, and you should really win this hands down.
Cheryl
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