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Tithonus

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Tithonus Dazzled by the Crowning of Aurora.
Francesco Solimena Italian, 1704

 

excerpt from Eos, by William Shakespeare, unpublished

 

Tithonus:

Eternal has the love forbidden tombed,

sweet oaths that influential Gods shall ease

my pains, that once immortal  hath assumed

exalt the agedness my crime's appease.

 

Decrepit by the minds eye chemistry,

forthwith, the speculum, from which a gaze

was pardoned for immeasurable guarantee,

from which domain, the science it obeys.

 

Discrete, that to bewilder claim by breadth,

as if forever glides along its girth; 

expectancy, no doubt shall measure death,

an infancy promoting one on earth.

 

Eternal do the bug bears of remorse,

combine the essense languishing beneath,

like Eden, had begun to over source

the certainty my Hell shall myelin sheath

 

Then Eos, the defining dawn of grace,

converge what arc to dark deceivings do

announce it though I doubt an ageing face,

enlightens it to flicker, - hence the woo!

 

Eos: (as Tithonus transforms into a cicada.)

I've wagered  wars upon this soul of wine,

fermenting strangers further from the drift

of sentimental weakness, though the vine,

is severed, shall our parting be as swift.

 

 

 

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  • GREAT JOB!

    Hey i like this im not verry bright so some things i had to use my dictionary to understand, but it was great i like it.


  • darkyinsoul
    April 26

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    Once again from beguining to end
    you draw a reader in leaving one
    wanting more.
    Excellent
    Aleshia


  • lunarlunacy
    December 25, 2008
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    True wordcraft!


  • RT KatPat
    December 15, 2008

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    absolutely gorgeous poetry!
    as always i needed a dictionary and a few extra reads to understand it properly


  • landmark
    December 11, 2008
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    ahhh i love this. definitely going into the finalists. thank you very much for entering. :-)


  • Laura
    December 11, 2008
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    wow this is amazing, i dont really know what else to say apart from wow


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 11, 2008

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    and you once told me that you think your poems aren't that good, i think you were wrong and this proves it, a golden and just mythical poem, keep it flowing this was something amazing, good luck in the contest

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