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Sweetest Place On Earth

Come inside the clouds and lets travel away
to a place where the sun shines on a golden day
and diamonds shower on earth like the sweetest rain
i will take you to the place high above
then return to the sweetest river with my love
when i kiss you the waterfalls will come down on you
and just one touch turns the whole sky so blue
it begins with whispers on your ears
then followed by the golden happy tears
its a journey through the clouds like the rain
then touching the water falls again.


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  • Angelflower
    December 21, 2008

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    This was a really sweet and soft poem, you did such a wonderful job, Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel

  • mmook
    December 11, 2008
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    well done! how sweet is this