Your touch is with me always
It's burnt into my skin
As soft and warm as sun rays
When a summer day sets in
Your soft voice never silent
It's forever in my ears
Serenading every moment
and calming all my fears
Your arms always enfold me
The strength of angels wings
They support and protect me wholly
Within the Safety a true love brings
I can never repay for the wonder
You will bring to my bachelor’s life.
Should be true to myself every moment -
You’re my girl - I would make you my Wife
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I like the poetry,
Very good rhyming.
Any girl would be happy to listen it if you read it loudly to her.
If you could change the final 4 lines and make it in the same rhythm and add rhyme as pretty as you did in the beginning it definitely might add to your poetry much more then you did.
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