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The wind blows through my hair,
and the rain drops hit my skin -
I inhale pine, dirt & wild life.

Arms are held high in ecstasy
as my body squirms with delight.

This freedom I have tasted
in the few minutes I have stolen
is like a new me,
       I am being born again.

Rushing waters ahead
and birds speaking aloud;
the Earth moves beneath my feet.


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  • Angelflower
    December 15, 2008

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    This was really beautiful. I really don't know what to say other then, this write really touched me, thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel