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Meditation

So very tired of life
everything is happening
where is my center?
Stop.
Breathe. . .
Feel the massage
let it all go
no more work
no more classes
no more stupid
kids
co-workers
boyfriends
ex-boyfriends
guys that want to be your boyfriend
Breathe.
think of shiny bunnies riding on rainbows
think of drifting clouds and flowing rivers
relax.
I'm done now. . . where are those brats?

Author notes

I used to work at a sleep away camp and whenever we got a day off we would go to this waterfall in the middle of nowhere. . .

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  • Angelflower
    December 15, 2008

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    Lol. this was really cute! I mean it had emotion in it but it also had certain humor.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt, it was different! thank you very much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel