Fire, like silk spew paragon breaths from a sea of ribbons, giving color to the sun
lain uopn a medley of song, hips wrench like asp, as ambrosia's goblet fills
candied scents swoon like butterflies and hummingbirds bathing in angel's nectar
baratone vibrations titilate peaks as energy's surge serenade Cupid's quiver
golden chariots filled with fermented wine encomapass the stars
pressed agaisnt ivory tiers, suppleness conform... then arch like a promise
tommorw's tide came, engulfed... then as if hushed titan, saturated and rippled away
midnight's echo lulled beneath summer's fever, feathered within gale she lay still
pearls part the sea from which the honey of her fruit lay spilled from submission
like a polished jewel, a song quivers in sand, and her fruit... washes out to sea
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt
Artist unknown
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful and truly moving. such a wonderful feel to this write. so soft and heavenly. You brought out a certain light to this picture and brought it to such life. I am truly amazed by it really.. Thank you very much for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Oh my you never fail to write the most beautiful of poems and this one is no exception !
Sensually elegant and your words melt in imagery of touch
I hope this takes the Gold
Best wishes and good luck to you
Julie
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