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Disolving

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Water saturates my senses
rocks are firm beneath
cover me and crystallize
with your transparent sheath
rivulets cascading
into secret avenues
mingling with the greens
then disolving into blues.





















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  • Angelflower
    December 15, 2008

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    This was really unique! you did a wonderful job with the prompt, I greatly enjoyed this. Best of luck in the contest!

    Angel