I REMEMBER LOVES ATTRACTION WASN'T A GOOD REACTION. IT WAS MORE LIKE A TRANSACTION FROM ONES HEART WITH NO PASSION. SHE FELT THAT IT WAS NATURAL KNOWING LOVE STEADY LEAVING ME. SO NATURALLY THE BEAT IN MY HEART FELT DECEIT IN ME. IT WAS A KEY MEMORY FROM MY MINDS FIRST MENTALITY. SO COO-LY AND CALMLY I STOPPED MYSELF PHYSIC-LY. STILL A BIG PART OF ME WAS REALLY HURTING SPIRITUALLY.HEADED TO END THERE'S ONE OTHER PART OF ME WILL LOVES FIRST REACTION REST MY BODY PEACEFULLY
A contest entry
- .give me something amazing. by landmark.
1650 points, ended January 7, 50 entries
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MUST we type in all CAPS? You do know how un-poetic that is, right? There seems to be no reason for this entire thing to be in all caps. When you write in all capital letters it:
1. Distracts the reader IMMENSLY, and it is very hard on the eye.
2. Takes away from what's good about the poem because it is so distracting. When reading this, I could not get past the capital letters. If you want to make SOME words capital to emphasize your point, then I would understand, but this poem has no reason to be in all Caps.
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