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My Day

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I stole this day
out of a pack
of seven cigarettes
and smoked on it

most of the morning ...

inhaling its forbidden fruit
under layers of camouflage
blankets

 

 

 

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Author notes

Image: Smoke by punk_not_dead26 on deviantArt

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  • Junebug-
    December 16, 2008

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    I love the fllow of this. The way iy starts and ends and leaves you speachless. Like a blow to gut that you never saw coming. It's a delicate thorn.

  • She Stole My Voice
    December 15, 2008

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    I adore the first part
    but I'm not too sure on the last three lines.
    :/
    But it's lovely!
    Thank you for entering ♥


  • righteousme
    December 11, 2008

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    I stole this day
    out of a pack
    of seven cigarettes
    and smoked on it
    most of the morning ...

    I LOVE IT!
    can i come under the covers and share a toke with you???


  • charcoal
    December 11, 2008
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    this is so good!
    wow