oh the crashing rapids
do nothing to defile
the instant that you struck
and my swiftly spreading smile
and my burning heart
will never cease its fire
untill i hold you in my arms
i long to be your atire
when i hold you close
within my lovers arms
ill be in those crashing rapids
allways keeping you from harm
-Sean-
Author notes
my name is Sean, my inspiration for this peom came from a picture from the contest i initially wrote it for, but it is one of my favorites 
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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has a very lovely rhythm to it thanks for sharing
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Actually, I was looking for your AP name...
Otherwise, very nicely done! Thank you for your entry & good luck in the contest. -
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ah yes, silly me it is Bladesrsharp.
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this was a really nice and loving write. I like the feel of this.. You expressed love very well. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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