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Alcoholism

Alcoholism, the pariah

feeding on the collapse

of self-control

befuddling the brain's sensibility;

transforming intelligence

into ridicule.

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  • poetchile
    May 8
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    pretty good.


  • Toxic Stardust
    May 8
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    very short, yet it gets the point across...I like it though...it could be the beginning of a really good long poem...
    Alicia Lynn and Gummi Bear


  • Sharon Marie gold member
    May 8

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    reality

    I like this article very much it shows originaility as well as reality this is not only poetic but it is wisdom to be shared

    Excellent Job!

    S. lagueux


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    a subject that i can identify with!Alcoholism, the pariah

    feeding on the collapse

    of self-control
    This stanza is wonderful..!

    becca


  • --Rising Fallen--
    December 16, 2008

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    Very true

    Very well put in so so few words, "Feeding on the collapse of self control" that's my favorite part. very good write, I enjoyed it.

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