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Unchanged

Love,
Real Love,
is
everlasting,
all enduring,
never ceasing,
unending,
constant,
Forever & Always
no matter what.
Even though
a heart
can be
broken,
even though
the pain
of
a broken heart
is almost
unbearable,
even though
it hurts so bad
you may
dream
of death,
even though
you're left alone
searcing
for anything
to numb the pain,
even though
you're left confused,
even though
the taste
of
Love
is often
bittersweet;
Real Love;
True Love
Remains
Unshaken;
Unchanged.

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  • Dovina
    January 2

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    indeed, these are all the things that true love is and has. an interesting style of writing it too

    thanks for your entry


  • Mrs. C.
    December 17, 2008
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    dq no ap name


  • Sokarjo
    December 15, 2008
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    So true!! A fantastic piece. Thanks for entering my contest. :-)


  • BabyGurlz
    December 12, 2008
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    babygurls

    this is a great poem about the truth of love and how it cahnges but at the same time doesnt

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