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i miss you more than yesterday

where are you right now?
what are you thinking about?
are you thinking about me?
cause im thinking of you
how i wish
i was in your arms
laying on your chest
listening to your steady heartbeat
i miss your kiss
i miss your smile
i miss
how i feel when im around you
and the way i die when you leave
i miss
the hugs that bring life to my body
the smell of your hair
the way you look in the rain
and how your eyes sparkle when your lips
long to touch mine
the way you hold me close as to say
i never want to leave this moment
but what i truly miss is
me and you
when you said
forever baby.

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  • cam3b23
    December 11, 2008

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    i think it is awesome.. i know exactly what this poem is trying to say, i miss all that too... great job.. xoxox