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Fate

When?
Who?
What can I do?
What can I say?
PRAY
When did it begin?
How will it end?
When?
So much going on.
So much wrong.
Will this pain last very long?
Time passing crazy.
I can only watch life happen.
Nowhere to go.
Nowhere to hide
Can only just be.
Can't change life.
Can't change FATE.

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  • Manda-Lou
    December 11, 2008
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    I enjoyed your poem, but I do not know which option it was for. Could you please tell me?