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Haters Need Love To? No.

You can stay with those who tear you down
cause they don't expect for you to stick around.

So when you stick to their side
and you swallow your pride
at the end of the ride - they'll play you.

You can indulge and you can pretend
You can take abuse and ascend

You can make excuses and You can lie
While these insensitive motherfuckers tie you down
and tear you apart
for trying to have the heart
to be a good person...
Ha...........more like a punching bag.


I.dont.think.so.


Word of Advice:

Dont beleive these haterz and ugly people are rare
They're as plain as day and they just-dont-care
--So I dont care.

It's no skin off my back

All I have to say is:,
-"BE WHAT YOU BE"-
---"DO WHAT YOU GOTTA DO"---
-----"KEEP LIGHT AND TIGHT"------
----------"SCREW WHOEVER THE-FUCK YOU WANNA SCREW"--------


But just let it be known


You Fuck With Me
And I Will Fuck Up Your Life

(copytwrite 2008 Patricia D.)

different than what i normally do, what do you think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Karon
    December 19, 2008

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    A very...straightforward writing. Seems more of a warning than anything else. Could play around with it and mayhap...aim it at the specific type of person a bit better. All in all not bad, my dear, not bad at all. It's good to see you writing again.