Just like your touch
The water ignites my soul
Leaving me breathless
Longing for the next moment
When I can feel the rush
Of existence
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended December 21, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Though this was a short write I truly loved the feeling that I got from this.. You did a wonderful job with the prompt.. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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A good analogoy of tehe sea to how ones soul is ignitedin a similar rush of esstasy..Good luck in the contest.
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very nice short but powerfull, great write and good luck
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