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Don't hold onto me

The worst part of dying
is the sadness in your eyes
and the weeping that you try so hard to stifle

you hold me like you could keep me in this world
you cannot, for the time has come
for me to move beyond life, into eternity

I regret that I cannot stay for you
do not hold onto me
let me go, and live yourself
live, and be comforted


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  • BleedingDeep
    December 12, 2008
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    Thanks for entering this pome! I loved the titel!