I click my teeth three times on the right;
Click them back on the left to even up.
This compulsive curse is tedious;
I'll never find an equilibrium.
This counting cannot make me whole,
But a happy median may even the score.
This calculus can only be broken
If odd numbers enter the equation.
What did you think
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An intresting write. You usuly do have diffrent meenings hiden within. Very good.
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Hmm, rare style of poetry. Mathematical? I supose...but yes, you did a profound job on it. One that deserves much praise. I found that people can get multiple meanings from this poem. Very intriguing...
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Interesting write. Compulsion can be a pain in the rump I'm sure....
Very descriptive and fairly easy to comprehend....
"This calculus can only be broken
If odd numbers enter the equation."
How about clicking full centered for 30 seconds????
Nice writting!!!!
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I love this interpretation of compulsion, as if it will never go away but can be balanced out with another compulsion. There is a realization that this behaviour will not help, much less lead to any resolution. Interesting stuff.
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interesting how this write views compulsion.
thanks.
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