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in joy and delight

When winter starts suffocating me  with hot winds
and when summer tries to freeze all my serene thoughts
I wait for the autumn to erect welcome arches to spring
and when in the mean while,  you come within a frown,  I smile at you lovingly

your mask within a frown and my smile with lots of affection
may embrace each other in joy and delight

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Prompt - "A smile within a frown"

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  • Ken-Maverick
    December 13, 2008

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    Lovely background to go with a lovely poem
    Wonderful write my friend

    All the best to you in the contest and thanks for entering

    Ken