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Circles

All I can do is think now.
All I can do is wonder.
And pace in circles
in circles.
in circles.
in circles.

The colors look wrong now.
The colors look misplaced.
That might just be my head
or my heart
or my mind
or my soul.

I've never been good
at figuring things out.
I never saw the end coming.
Maybe that's why I'm confused.

In circles.

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  • TwilightDazzles
    December 11, 2008

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    I think this is a great write for the picture. I like the unique style of writing and I agree that the last lines are very thought provoking. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest


  • The Otep
    December 11, 2008
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    *claps* Greatness, Olivia! I love the whole circle inituation. Very nice touch


  • styrofoam
    December 11, 2008
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    i like it (:


  • myusikah
    December 10, 2008

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    That looks cool. I personally like that last line. It's just...so meaningful and abstract.

    --> pia ♫♪