Strength of the taproot, bond of love,
shadows beneath pale moon above.
Silence of twilight, approaching dark,
hush of evening, quells meadow lark.
Waves of emotion upon fertile land,
rooted in graduer of love so grand.
Contrast starkness, mighty stand tall,
sometimes weaker of heart shall fall.
Strong survives where true love goes.
taproot stay strong as cold wind blows.
Throughtout time, not be recanted,
love withstands when firmly planted.
Author notes
THE PICTURE CREDIT... AMERICANPSYCHO
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt-10 entries by TwilightDazzles.
700 points, ended December 12, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very good, Miss Sandy! I love the imagery here. Keep up the great writing, and good luck in all future poetic writing!
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Good Morning,. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy
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A wonderful written piece.
Excellent take on the prompt.
I love the whole poem and your last line is perfect..
"love withstands when firmly planted"

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Both are appreciated. Bless You, Sandy
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This is a beautiful take on the picture. I love the rhyme and rhythm of this, it's very natural. Excellent job! Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest


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Thank you for the nice comment and the honorable mention. Take care, Sandy
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Brilliant
Wonderful take on the picture prompt. My mind went blank over the image
However, you created such a lovely poem of both nature and love. I love the use of the word "Taproot" very unique and superb.
Wish you the very best
Much love and many blessings


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Good Morning Dear Friend
Well hi David, What a pleasure to hear from you. Always appreciate your thoughtful and caring comments. You take care,
Love and Blessings,
Sandy
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