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Taproot Of Love

Strength of the taproot, bond of love,
shadows beneath pale moon above.
Silence of twilight, approaching dark,
hush of evening, quells meadow lark.

Waves of emotion upon fertile land,
rooted in graduer of love so grand.
Contrast starkness, mighty stand tall,
sometimes weaker of heart shall fall.

Strong survives where true love goes.
taproot stay strong as cold wind blows.
Throughtout time, not be recanted,
love withstands when firmly planted.

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THE PICTURE CREDIT... AMERICANPSYCHO

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  • poetic daughter
    December 12, 2008

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    This is very good, Miss Sandy! I love the imagery here. Keep up the great writing, and good luck in all future poetic writing!


    • Sandygram
      December 14, 2008
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      Good Morning,. Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy


  • Jesann gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    A wonderful written piece.
    Excellent take on the prompt.
    I love the whole poem and your last line is perfect..
    "love withstands when firmly planted"


    • Sandygram
      December 12, 2008
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      Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Both are appreciated. Bless You, Sandy


  • TwilightDazzles
    December 11, 2008

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    This is a beautiful take on the picture. I love the rhyme and rhythm of this, it's very natural. Excellent job! Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest


    • Sandygram
      December 14, 2008
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      Thank you for the nice comment and the honorable mention. Take care, Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Brilliant

    Wonderful take on the picture prompt. My mind went blank over the image However, you created such a lovely poem of both nature and love. I love the use of the word "Taproot" very unique and superb.
    Wish you the very best
    Much love and many blessings

    • Sandygram
      December 12, 2008
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      Good Morning Dear Friend

      Well hi David, What a pleasure to hear from you. Always appreciate your thoughtful and caring comments. You take care,

      Love and Blessings,
      Sandy

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